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Onyx (Onyx, #1)

PDF Quite a disappointing short story. For one thing, 13% of the story length is filler; bio of the author, info about other works in the series etc. This makes an already short story even shorter.

Secondly the medical play is very light and mild, whereas from the other reviews I expected something much harder.

Thirdly, the whole thing rang really false. One MC says "just being around you . . .talking to you . . . makes me feel comfortable, wanted" but as this point they've hardly said a word to each other and spent almost no time together.

I know it's a short story, but it was BDSM lite, and it wasn't even romantic to make up for the lack of hotness. Re-read the Deviations series instead .

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